May I have a translation correction of this 1863 Steinbrundorf, Vlotho, birth record:

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https://www.familysearch.org/ark:/61903/3:1:3Q9M-CSLT-JQRX-5?i=244&cat=162977

film # 8206194; image # 245 of 409, page 465; birth # 113; son # 67

Hermann Heinrich Wilhelm, what is 28/9. 65?, born 20 September 1863, midday at 12, what is 6/Oct. 61?, parents: Ernst Friedrich Platte and Friedrike Justine Sturhan? of Valdorf 15?

christened 27 September 1863.